The past participle phrase "Driven by passion" is meant to modify the person reading the novel, but it incorrectly seems to modify the novel itself. Correction: "Driven by passion, John read the novel in one sitting".

The present participle phrase "Walking through the forest" should be followed by a comma to indicate the separation between the phrase and the main clause.

The past participle phrase "recognised for his literary contributions" correctly comes after the noun it modifies (author) and is separated off from the main clause with a comma.

The past participle phrase "Eager to impress the guests" is meant to modify the person setting the table, but it incorrectly seems to modify the dinner table, creating a dangling modifier. Correction: "Eager to impress the guests, Jayne set the dinner table with fine china".

The past participle phrase "Baked to perfection" is meant to modify the cookies, but it incorrectly seems to modify the children, leading to a misplaced modifier. Correction: "Baked to perfection, the smell of cookies in the kitchen was irresistible to the children".

The past participle phrase "written by a famous author" correctly comes after the noun it modifies (book) and is separated off from the main clause with commas.

The present participle phrase is "celebrating their hard-earned victory with cheers and applause" and so a comma should be placed before "celebrating".

In this example, "Dancing in the moonlight" is a fronted present participle phrase that provides additional information about how the couple celebrated their anniversary. The phrase is correctly placed at the beginning of the sentence and is followed by a comma.

The present participle phrase "Prepared with care" modifies the chef, but it should modify "the delicious meal". Correction: "Prepared with care, the delicious meal was served to the guests (by the chef)".

The present participle phrase "Running late for the meeting" is intended to modify the person completing the report. However, it mistakenly appears to modify "the report". This creates confusion about who is running late for the meeting. Corrected: "Running late for the meeting, Susan hastily completed the report".

In this example, "Jumping over the hurdle" is a fronted present participle phrase that provides additional information about the athlete. The phrase is correctly placed at the beginning of the sentence and is followed by a comma.

If the participle phrase is after the noun in the middle/end of a sentence and is giving essential information, no comma is needed. "holding the big stick" is identifying which man so it is essential information. Correction: "I was scared by the man holding the big stick".